Audit: QRS - Anktiva to Treat Cancer
Audit conducted on 24/09/2026 02:51 using AI4L / Opus 5.5
Summary
| Items | Count |
|---|---|
| Total | 94 |
| Passed | 88 |
| Failed | 0 |
| N/A | 6 |
| Pass Rate | 100.00% |
- Total = Passed + Failed + N/A
- Pass Rate = Passed / (Passed + Failed) × 100
- N/A items are excluded from the pass rate calculation
1. General Rules
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1.1 | Every claim, magnitude, label, recommendation, and statement in the QRS is literally supported by content in the source ER. | 🟢 | All QRS statements trace to ER text (Therapeutic Protocol, Expected Benefits, Potential Risks, Key Interactions & Contraindications, Monitoring, Practical Considerations, Conclusion). |
| 1.2 | Where the ER uses cautious phrasing (“not formally studied”, “None documented in human trials to date”, “theoretical concern”, “data are limited”), the QRS uses the same phrasing. | 🟢 | Cautious phrasing carried through: “Splitting is not studied” (action_3_sub), “(theoretical)” on the lymphoma contraindication. |
| 1.3 | The QRS never strengthens an ER claim (e.g., “not formally studied” → “not required”) or softens one (e.g., “do not use during pregnancy” → “use with caution during pregnancy”). | 🟢 | No strengthening or softening; interaction severities (caution/monitor) and contraindications match ER wording. |
| 1.4 | The QRS does not relabel an ER fact under a different decision category. A “Benefit-Modifying Factor” from ER section is not surfaced as a “Caution”; a “Risk-Modifying Factor” is not surfaced as a “Side Effect”; etc. | 🟢 | Contraindications come from ER “Populations who should avoid ANKTIVA”; interactions, benefits and risks keep their ER categories and tiers. |
| 1.5 | PubMed IDs, study citations, expert names, clinical trial identifiers (NCT*), and brand names appear in the QRS only if they appear in the source ER for the same fact. | 🟢 | Only brand name is TICE BCG, which the ER uses for the same regimen; no PMIDs, NCT IDs or expert names. |
| 1.6 | The QRS does not introduce new attributions. | 🟢 |
2. Focus, Tone & Audience
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2.1 | The QRS follows the tone of the ER, which is determined by the ER’s own language, phrasing, and framing. | 🟢 | |
| 2.2 | The tone of the QRS is simultaneously expert, accessible, objective, and data-driven, but also empowering and encouraging | 🟢 | |
| 2.3 | The QRS reads as a trusted, knowledgeable guide rather than a prescriptive doctor | 🟢 | |
| 2.4 | The QRS avoids language that implies medical or clinical advice | 🟢 | |
| 2.5 | The QRS “presents information” instead of “providing guidance”, “recommending”, or “advising” | 🟢 | |
| 2.6 | The QRS never addresses “the reader” directly — it presents evidence, not guidance | 🟢 | No second-person address found. |
| 2.7 | The QRS is written in plain language, avoiding unnecessary medical jargon | 🟢 | Technical terms are glossed in plain language (BCG, cystoscopy, cytology, eGFR, CD4, myocardial infarction). |
| 2.8 | Information is presented in a concise and very compact manner | 🟢 | |
| 2.9 | It DOES NOT address the reader directly | 🟢 | |
| 2.10 | The target audience is health- and longevity-oriented adults who are risk-aware, proactive, and actively seeking to optimize health or apply the intervention under review. | 🟢 | |
| 2.11 | The target audience is willing to employ lifestyle and behavioral changes as well as follow protocols that may be inconvenient, costly, or require effort. | 🟢 | |
| 2.12 | The document is NOT written for the general population, who are unwilling to employ lifestyle and behavioral changes or follow protocols that may be inconvenient, costly, or require effort. | 🟢 | |
| 2.13 | Framing, takeaways, and risk/benefit weighting throughout the document reflect this audience, including where an intervention’s signal for the average person differs from its signal for this audience. | 🟢 | |
| 2.14 | The document’s own voice frames usage in longevity terms, not “anti-aging” (e.g., “anti-aging clinics”, “anti-aging community”, “anti-aging medicine”). Proper names that contain “anti-aging” (e.g., “American Academy of Anti-Aging Medicine”) are quoted verbatim. | 🟢 | No “anti-aging” wording. |
| 2.15 | The document’s own voice uses formal clinical and scientific terminology, not colloquial or consumer-grade language (e.g., “oral medication” not “pill(s)”; “oral” / “administered orally” not “taken by mouth” / “given by mouth”; “injection” not “shot”; “adverse event” not “bad reaction”). This holds on EVERY surface, including the QRS lede — the stricter plain-language bar (see 2.7) does not license lay phrasing for route of administration. Direct quotes from sources are exempt. | 🟢 | Route described as instillation by catheter / subcutaneous dosing; no colloquial terms. |
3. Template Integrity
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 3.1 | The following labels and headings on the QRS are fixed and not modified: Card and section headings: “Protocol”, “Time to effect”, “Benefits”, “Risk & Side Effects”, “Monitoring”, “Qualitative Assessment”; Gate headings: “Contraindications”, “Key Interactions”; Tier labels: “High”, “Medium”, “Low”, “Speculative”; Table column headers in Monitoring: “Marker”, “Target”, “Why” | 🟢 | |
| 3.2 | All “…” from the [qrs_template] are present in the the QRS. | 🟢 | All template spans present; repeating marker_#/qualitative_item_# spans expanded as numbered instances. |
| 3.3 | Spans that are not addressed in a checklist item are left unchanged | 🟢 | website spans and all non-variable markup identical to the template. |
4. Formatting
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 4.1 | When the source ER section is empty, the QRS uses the ER’s own empty-state phrasing verbatim. Typical phrasings are “None documented in human trials to date” and “Not formally studied” | 🟢 | No ER source section is empty; empty High benefit tier is handled per 12.5. |
| 4.2 | Where the ER presents a bulleted item as “Label: content”, the QRS uses the ER’s bold label verbatim as the cell or row label. | 🟢 | Action labels and interaction labels use the ER bold labels verbatim. |
| 4.3 | Labels are not paraphrased, abbreviated, or invented. | 🟢 | |
| 4.4 | The QRS DOES NOT use emoji indicators (no 🟩, 🟥, 🟨, etc.). Color and emphasis are conveyed through CSS and bold labels. | 🟢 | No emoji indicators in the QRS. |
| 4.5 | The QRS is designed to render on one A4 page. Any section that has more content in the ER than fits the per-section budget is condensed by the LLM, not extended onto a second page. | 🟢 | Sections are condensed relative to the ER (no mechanistic rationale, magnitudes or citations carried). |
5. Metadata
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 5.1 | The metadata is placed inside a single HTML comment that is the first element after “<!doctype html>” and before any other comment, head, or body content. | 🟢 | |
| 5.2 | Inside that HTML comment the YAML block is delimited by a line “—” opening and a line “—” closing. Text before the opening “—” is permitted but is not parsed as YAML. | 🟢 | |
| 5.3 | The metadata is not visible in any rendered view of the QRS and is not surfaced by any other element on the sheet. | 🟢 | |
| 5.4 | All frontmatter values are trimmed: no leading or trailing whitespace, no surrounding quotes unless the value contains a colon, bracket, or leading special character that requires YAML quoting. | 🟢 | duration is quoted because it contains a colon. |
| 5.5 | The filename of the source ER is stated as “er_filename: [er_filename]” | 🟢 | |
| 5.6 | Version of the QRS.md file used to create the document is stated as “qrs_prompt_version: [Version of QRS.md]” | 🟢 | 26.9.23 matches QRS.md version. |
| 5.7 | Creation date and time of the document is stated as “qrs_creation_date: [YYYY-MMDD-HHMM]” (e.g., 2026-0501-1430) | 🟢 | 2026-0924-0206 |
| 5.8 | The nickname of the AI used to create the document is stated as “qrs_creator_ai_nickname: [qrs_creator_ai_nickname]” | 🟢 | |
| 5.9 | The nickname of the AI is just a single word model name without version, etc. (e.g., Opus, Sonnet, Grok, Gemini, ChatGPT) | 🟢 | |
| 5.10 | The full name of the AI used to create the document is stated as “qrs_creator_ai_fullname: [qrs_creator_ai_fullname]” | 🟢 | |
| 5.11 | The full name of the AI consists of the [qrs_creator_ai_nickname] and the model version number and no additional qualifier (e.g., Opus 4.6, Sonnet 3.2, Grok 4.5, Gemini 3.1, ChatGPT 5.4) | 🟢 | Opus 5.5 |
| 5.12 | The filename of the document is stated as “qrs_filename: [filename of this document]” | 🟢 | |
| 5.13 | All frontmatter values are trimmed: no leading or trailing whitespace, no surrounding quotes unless the value contains a colon, bracket, or leading special character that requires YAML quoting. | 🟢 |
6. Page Title & Header
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6.1 | [page_title] is set to the [canonical_topic] of the ER frontmatter followed by “ - Quick Reference Sheet” (e.g., “Intervention - Quick Reference Sheet”). The [canonical_topic] is HTML-entity-encoded as needed (e.g., & for &) |
🟢 | “Anktiva to Treat Cancer - Quick Reference Sheet” |
| 6.2 | [header_topic] is set to the [canonical_topic] of the ER frontmatter, with HTML entities encoded as needed (e.g., & for &) |
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| 6.3 | [header_subline_date] is set to [qrs_creation_date reformatted as MM/DD/YYYY] | 🟢 | 09/24/2026 from 2026-0924-0206. |
| 6.4 | [header_subline_model] is set to [qrs_creator_ai_fullname] | 🟢 | |
| 6.5 | No additional header content appears: no badge, version stamp, AKA / alternate names line, source-AI attribution, audit date, or QRS variant marker. | 🟢 |
7. At-A-Glance Section
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 7.1 | [at_a_glance] opens by saying what the intervention is — its kind (e.g., dietary supplement, prescription medication, peptide, plant, procedure, practice) — and what it is used for, in plain language, before any verdict on the evidence | 🟢 | Opens with “a prescription-only, laboratory-made immune signaling protein” and its use for early bladder cancer returning after BCG. |
| 7.2 | [at_a_glance] is dense, execution-oriented summary of the ER Conclusion section |
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| 7.3 | [at_a_glance] is no longer than 70 words | 🟢 | 70 words (script count). |
| 7.4 | Every fact in [at_a_glance] is supported by a distinct passage in the ER. | 🟢 | Each fact maps to the ER Conclusion; “prescription-only” to the Examine/ConsumerLab sections. |
| 7.5 | It DOES NOT use acronyms or technical classifications that require specialist knowledge, uses plain-language terms instead | 🟢 | |
| 7.6 | It DOES NOT cite specific trials (names, years, sample sizes, p-values) | 🟢 | |
| 7.7 | It DOES NOT cite effect sizes, relative risks, or statistical results | 🟢 |
8. Contraindications
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 8.1 | The section is derived from the ER Key Interactions & Contraindications section |
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| 8.2 | [stop_items] represent the Contraindications from the ER | 🟢 | All 8 ER “Populations who should avoid ANKTIVA” items present. |
| 8.3 | Individual [stop_items] are formatted as <li></li> | 🟢 | |
| 8.4 | Items are as concise as possible. No trailing explanations, no elaborations, no mechanistic rationale, no attributions, no citations, no study details. No content after an em-dash, en-dash, or hyphen-dash (e.g., “— dose reduction required”, “— reduced efficacy”) — these trailing clauses are stripped. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | Only short plain-language glosses remain; no trailing dash clauses. |
| 8.5 | Parenthetical qualifiers from the ER bullet — time windows, severity classes, threshold values, clinical staging — ARE preserved as part of the item, kept as concise as possible (shortened or trimmed where needed to fit the one-page budget, but never dropped entirely). | 🟢 | Qualifiers kept: stage T2 or higher, 14 days, >10 mg prednisone, NYHA III–IV, 6 months, eGFR ≤40 mL/min, (theoretical). |
| 8.6 | When the ER uses ranking notation inside parens (e.g., “>” for severity ordering) that depends on an explanatory phrase to interpret, normalize the items to a plain comma-separated list rather than carrying through the bare symbol. | 🟢 | No ranking notation in the ER bullets; none carried through. |
| 8.7 | The section is left empty ONLY IF the ER’s Key Interactions & Contraindications section identifies no population, condition, or scenario for which the intervention should be avoided, deferred, or used only under specialist supervision. |
🟢 | Section is populated; ER lists populations to avoid. |
| 8.8 | If the section is left empty, an HTML comment inside the [stop_items] span records the ER basis for the absence, naming or quoting the ER text relied on. E.g. | N/A | Section is not empty. |
9. Key Interactions
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 9.1 | The section is derived from the ER Key Interactions & Contraindications section |
🟢 | |
| 9.2 | [caution_items] represent the Key Interactions from the ER, excluding any that are already listed as Contraindications | 🟢 | All 9 ER interactions present; they are drug classes rather than listed contraindications. |
| 9.3 | Individual [caution_items] are formatted as <li></li> | 🟢 | |
| 9.4 | Items are as concise as possible. No trailing explanations, no elaborations, no mechanistic rationale, no attributions, no citations, no study details. No content after an em-dash, en-dash, or hyphen-dash (e.g., “— dose reduction required”, “— reduced efficacy”) — these trailing clauses are stripped. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | Each item reduced to label plus severity (caution/monitor). |
| 9.5 | Parenthetical qualifiers from the ER bullet — example drug lists, time windows, severity classes, threshold values, clinical staging — ARE preserved as part of the item, kept as concise as possible (shortened or trimmed where needed to fit the one-page budget, but never dropped entirely). | 🟢 | Example drug lists and thresholds (above 10 mg/day, above 3 g/day, above 400 IU) preserved. |
| 9.6 | When the ER uses ranking notation inside parens (e.g., “>” for severity ordering) that depends on an explanatory phrase to interpret, normalize the items to a plain comma-separated list rather than carrying through the bare symbol. | 🟢 | No ranking notation in the ER bullets; none carried through. |
| 9.7 | The section is left empty ONLY IF the ER’s Key Interactions & Contraindications section identifies no interaction, additive effect, or exposure that changes how the intervention is used. |
🟢 | Section is populated; ER lists interactions. |
| 9.8 | If the section is left empty, an HTML comment inside the [caution_items] span records the ER basis for the absence, naming or quoting the ER text relied on. E.g. | N/A | Section is not empty. |
10. Protocol
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 10.1 | The section is derived from the ER Protocol section |
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| 10.2 | The three sets of [action] items cover the three most important actionable implementation aspects from the ER Protocol section |
🟢 | Approved bladder regimen, Second induction and maintenance, Single versus split dosing. |
| 10.3 | If less that three distinct actionable implementation aspects are mentioned in the ER the unused sets are left empty and made invisible, not filled with placeholder text or empty-state phrasing. | N/A | ER provides more than three actionable aspects. |
| 10.4 | All used [action_#label], [action#value], [action#_sub] items are filled with meaningful content derived from the ER Protocol section. |
🟢 |
11. Time to Effect
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 11.1 | The three sets of [time] items cover the three most important time-to-effect aspects from the ER | 🟢 | 3-month assessment, 6-month late response, 12-month success definition (Practical Considerations, Monitoring Protocol). |
| 11.2 | The sets are picked and ordered by the magnitude of the related benefit | 🟢 | All three relate to complete response, the main benefit, in chronological order. |
| 11.3 | If less that three distinct time-to-effect aspects are mentioned in the ER the unused sets are left empty and made invisible, not filled with placeholder text or empty-state phrasing. | N/A | ER provides three time-to-effect aspects. |
| 11.4 | All used [time_#label], [time#value], [time#_sub] items are filled with meaningful content derived from the ER. | 🟢 | |
| 11.5 | If the ER does not provide any information on time to effect, the section is removed completely from the Protocol Panel |
N/A | ER provides time-to-effect information. |
12. Benefits
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 12.1 | The section is derived from the ER Expected Benefits section |
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| 12.2 | Key variables are [benefits_high], [benefits_medium], [benefits_low], [benefits_speculative] | 🟢 | |
| 12.3 | Items are as concise as possible. No explanations, no elaborations, no effect sizes, no qualifiers, no attributions, no citations, no study details, no mechanistic explanations, etc. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | |
| 12.4 | Parenthetical content — including effect sizes, sample notes, mechanistic hints, and example studies — is stripped, NOT preserved. | 🟢 | No parenthetical content in benefit items. |
| 12.5 | If no items of a specific sub-section (high, medium, low, speculative) are present the respective is set to “display=none”, not filled with “None documented in human trials to date” or similar empty-state phrasing. | 🟢 | ER has no High benefit; benefits_high span set to display: none. |
13. Risks
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 13.1 | The section is derived from the ER Potential Risks & Side Effects section |
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| 13.2 | Key variables are [risks_high], [risks_medium], [risks_low], [risks_speculative] | 🟢 | |
| 13.3 | Items are as concise as possible. No explanations, no elaborations, no effect sizes, no qualifiers, no attributions, no citations, no study details, no mechanistic explanations, etc. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | |
| 13.4 | Parenthetical content — including frequencies, severity grades, sample notes, mechanistic hints, and example studies — is stripped, NOT preserved. | 🟢 | No parenthetical content in risk items. |
| 13.5 | If no items of a specific sub-section (high, medium, low, speculative) are present the respective is set to “display=none”, not filled with “None documented in human trials to date” or similar empty-state phrasing. | N/A | All four risk tiers have items. |
14. Monitoring
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 14.1 | The section is derived from the ER Monitoring section |
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| 14.2 | All measurable/quantifiable biomarkers from the Monitoring section are listed |
🟢 | All 8 ER table biomarkers listed. |
| 14.3 | [monitoring_cadence] is populated with the monitoring cadence/frequency derived from the ER Monitoring section. It is not left with placeholder text or empty. |
🟢 | Cadence matches the ER ongoing-monitoring paragraph. |
15. Qualitative Assessment
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 15.1 | The section is derived from the ER Monitoring section |
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| 15.2 | All subjective/qualitative biomarkers from the Monitoring section are listed |
🟢 | All 5 ER qualitative markers listed. |
Issues 24/09/2026 02:51
Pass rate 100.00%. No issues found.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:47
- 7.2 — Lede omits key execution risk: The at-a-glance (QRS line 433) mentions only “mostly local, short-lived side effects” and omits the Conclusion’s decision-relevant risk that postponing surgery lets some cancers invade deeper (ER line 462).
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:47
- 7.2 — Added surgery-delay risk to lede: Added “though postponing surgery lets some cancers invade deeper” to the at-a-glance (from ER Conclusion) and tightened wording (“together with” to “with”, “has come back despite that treatment” to “returned despite it”) to stay within 70 words.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:44
- 7.5 — Clinical-register word in lede: The At-a-Glance (line 433) uses “is instilled into the bladder”, a clinical-register term a non-specialist would not use unprompted; the ER Conclusion (line 458) uses the plain wording “delivered into the bladder”.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:44
- 7.5 — Clinical-register word in lede: Replaced “is instilled into the bladder” with the plainer ER Conclusion wording “is delivered into the bladder” in the At-a-Glance.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:41
- 2.15 — Lay route phrasing in lede: At-A-Glance (QRS line 433) says Anktiva “is delivered into the bladder” instead of the formal “instilled into the bladder”.
- 4.2 / 4.3 — Interaction label not verbatim: Key Interactions item at QRS line 565 inserts “immune signaling protein drugs:” into the ER bold label “Other cytokine therapies (aldesleukin, interferon alfa):” (ER line 325).
- 13.4 — Parenthetical kept in risks: risks_high (QRS line 578) retains the parenthetical “(under-the-skin)” in “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous (under-the-skin) injection”.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:41
- 2.15 — Formal route phrasing in lede: Changed “is delivered into the bladder” to “is instilled into the bladder” in the At-A-Glance.
- 4.2 / 4.3 — Restored verbatim interaction label: Removed the inserted “immune signaling protein drugs:” so the label reads “Other cytokine therapies (aldesleukin, interferon alfa):” as in the ER.
- 13.4 — Stripped risk parenthetical: Replaced “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous (under-the-skin) injection” with “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous dosing”, matching the ER heading.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:39
- 2.7 — Unexplained specialist terms: “Lynch syndrome” in [benefits_speculative] (line 531) and “cytokine therapies” in [caution_items] (line 565) appear without the plain-language explanation the ER provides (“an inherited cancer-risk condition”, ER line 215; immune signaling proteins, ER line 243).
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:39
- 2.7 — Glossed specialist terms: Changed “cancer prevention in Lynch syndrome” to “cancer prevention in Lynch syndrome, an inherited cancer-risk condition” and “Other cytokine therapies (aldesleukin, interferon alfa)” to “Other cytokine therapies (immune signaling protein drugs: aldesleukin, interferon alfa)”, using the ER’s own explanations.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:35
- 8.4 — Trailing rationale in contraindication: The item at QRS line 544 ends with “(BCG requirements)”, an explanatory attribution of why the conditions apply rather than a decision-gate qualifier; 8.4 requires such explanations to be stripped.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:35
- 8.4 — Trailing rationale removed: Removed “(BCG requirements)” from the end of the active-infection/fever/blood-in-urine/14-day-resection contraindication, leaving only the decision-gate conditions.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:31
- 2.15 — Lay route-of-administration phrasing: risks_high (line 578) reads “injection-site reactions with under-the-skin injection” instead of the formal route term “subcutaneous” used in the ER (line 247).
- 8.5 — Dropped parenthetical qualifier: The contraindication at line 544 omits the ER’s parenthetical “(BCG requirements)” (ER line 331), which scopes the UTI/fever/visible blood/14-day resection exclusions.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:31
- 2.15 — Formal route term restored: Changed risks_high “injection-site reactions with under-the-skin injection” to “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous (under-the-skin) injection”.
- 8.5 — Parenthetical qualifier restored: Appended the ER qualifier “(BCG requirements)” to the contraindication on active urinary tract infection, fever, visible blood in the urine, or within 14 days of bladder resection.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:27
- 2.7 — Unexplained specialist terms: Benefits Low uses “checkpoint-inhibitor” (line 528) and Risks High uses “subcutaneous dosing” (line 578) without a plain-language rendering on the sheet.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:27
- 2.7 — Plain-language term rendering: Changed Benefits Low “restored checkpoint-inhibitor activity” to “restored activity of immune-brake-releasing checkpoint inhibitors” and Risks High “subcutaneous dosing” to “under-the-skin injection”.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:25
- 2.15 — Lay route-of-administration phrasing: [risks_high] (line 578) reads “injection-site reactions when injected under the skin”, lay phrasing for the subcutaneous route instead of the ER’s formal “Injection-Site Reactions with Subcutaneous Dosing”.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:25
- 2.15 — Formal route-of-administration phrasing: In [risks_high], changed “injection-site reactions when injected under the skin” to “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous dosing”, matching the ER heading.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:21
- 2.7 — Unexplained jargon in Risks: “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous dosing” (risks_high, line 578) and “Disseminated BCG infection” (risks_low, line 584) use specialist terms without plain-language wording, unlike the rest of the sheet.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:21
- 2.7 — Plain-language risk wording: Changed “injection-site reactions with subcutaneous dosing” to “injection-site reactions when injected under the skin” (risks_high) and “Disseminated BCG infection” to “BCG infection spreading beyond the bladder” (risks_low).
Issues 24/09/2026 02:18
- 8.4 — Trailing rationale in contraindication: The stop item at line 544 ends with “(BCG requirements)”, a rationale rather than a time window, severity, threshold or staging qualifier.
- 13.3 / 13.4 — Parenthetical gloss in risks: risks_medium at line 581 keeps the explanatory parenthetical “(a kidney-function marker)” after “serum creatinine”.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:18
- 8.4 — Trailing rationale removed: Removed “(BCG requirements)” from the end of the active-infection/bladder-resection contraindication item.
- 13.3 / 13.4 — Parenthetical gloss removed: Changed “rise in serum creatinine (a kidney-function marker) and potassium” to “rise in the kidney-function marker creatinine and in potassium” in risks_medium.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:14
- 2.7 — Unexplained specialist terms: “Cystoscopy, cytology” (time_1_sub line 489, marker_2_name line 617), “leukocyte esterase” (marker_6_target line 664), “NK-cell” (stop_items line 549) and “creatinine” (risks_medium line 581, marker_3 lines 628/634) appear without the plain-language glosses the ER provides.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:14
- 2.7 — Specialist terms glossed: Added ER-sourced glosses: cystoscopy (camera examination of the bladder) and cytology (microscope check of urine cells) in time_1_sub, leukocyte esterase (white-cell enzyme) in marker_6_target, NK-cell (natural killer cell) in stop_items, and creatinine (a kidney-function marker) in risks_medium.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:12
- 2.7 — Unexplained medical jargon terms: “lymphopenia” (line 531), “cystectomy” (line 581), “IL-15–dependent lymphoid cancers” (line 587), “myocardial infarction” (line 547) and “filling defects” (line 675) appear without the plain-language glosses the ER provides.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:12
- 2.7 — Replaced unexplained jargon terms: Changed “lymphopenia” to “low lymphocyte counts”, “delaying cystectomy” to “delaying bladder removal”, “IL-15–dependent lymphoid cancers” to “immune-cell cancers that depend on the immune signal IL-15”, and added ER glosses “(heart attack)” after “myocardial infarction” and “(gaps in the contrast outline)” after “filling defects”.
Issues 24/09/2026 02:08
- 2.7 — Unexplained specialist acronyms: “CIS” (marker_2_target, line 620), “BCG” (action_1_value line 447 and gate items lines 544, 558), “eGFR” (line 548) and “CD4” (line 545) appear without any plain-language explanation anywhere on the sheet.
Fixes 24/09/2026 02:08
- 2.7 — Specialist acronyms explained: Added plain-language glosses: BCG explained in action_1_sub (“BCG is a weakened tuberculosis-related bacterium”), “biopsies free of CIS” changed to “biopsies free of carcinoma in situ (flat surface cancer)”, “eGFR ≤40 mL/min” changed to “Kidney filtering capacity (eGFR) ≤40 mL/min”, and “low CD4 counts” changed to “low CD4 (helper T cell) counts”.