Audit: QRS - Intermittent Hypoxia-Hyperoxia for Health & Longevity
Audit conducted on 30/08/2026 03:32 using AI4L / Opus 5
Summary
| Items | Count |
|---|---|
| Total | 93 |
| Passed | 83 |
| Failed | 0 |
| N/A | 10 |
| Pass Rate | 100.00% |
- Total = Passed + Failed + N/A
- Pass Rate = Passed / (Passed + Failed) × 100
- N/A items are excluded from the pass rate calculation
1. General Rules
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1.1 | Every claim, magnitude, label, recommendation, and statement in the QRS is literally supported by content in the source ER. | 🟢 | Protocol cells trace to ER lines 390–394; time-to-effect to ER line 447; benefits/risks to the ER tier headings; monitoring rows to the ER biomarker table (ER lines 481–492); cadence to ER line 477. |
| 1.2 | Where the ER uses cautious phrasing (“not formally studied”, “None documented in human trials to date”, “theoretical concern”, “data are limited”), the QRS uses the same phrasing. | 🟢 | The one hedged value, RMSSD “No established population target”, is carried over verbatim (QRS line 787 vs ER line 491). |
| 1.3 | The QRS never strengthens an ER claim (e.g., “not formally studied” → “not required”) or softens one (e.g., “do not use during pregnancy” → “use with caution during pregnancy”). | 🟢 | All 14 ER avoidance populations remain absolute contraindications; the ER’s “Absolute contraindication” for erythropoiesis-stimulating agents is placed in the stop gate, not the caution gate. |
| 1.4 | The QRS does not relabel an ER fact under a different decision category. A “Benefit-Modifying Factor” from ER section is not surfaced as a “Caution”; a “Risk-Modifying Factor” is not surfaced as a “Side Effect”; etc. | 🟢 | Nothing from the ER Benefit- or Risk-Modifying Factors sections appears in the gates; gates draw only on ER Key Interactions & Contraindications. |
| 1.5 | PubMed IDs, study citations, expert names, clinical trial identifiers (NCT*), and brand names appear in the QRS only if they appear in the source ER for the same fact. | 🟢 | No PMIDs, NCT identifiers, author names, or device brands (ReOxy, CellGym, OxyTerra) appear anywhere in the QRS. |
| 1.6 | The QRS does not introduce new attributions. | 🟢 | No attributions of any kind in the QRS body. |
2. Focus, Tone & Audience
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2.1 | The QRS follows the tone of the ER, which is determined by the ER’s own language, phrasing, and framing. | 🟢 | Neutral, measured register matching the ER; “the findings that hold up” mirrors the ER Conclusion’s framing. |
| 2.2 | The tone of the QRS is simultaneously expert, accessible, objective, and data-driven, but also empowering and encouraging | 🟢 | Tiered benefits/risks and quantified monitoring targets carry the data; the At-A-Glance separates what holds up from what does not. |
| 2.3 | The QRS reads as a trusted, knowledgeable guide rather than a prescriptive doctor | 🟢 | Protocol and monitoring cells state what trials and practitioners do; no imperatives directed at a reader. |
| 2.4 | The QRS avoids language that implies medical or clinical advice | 🟢 | No “should”, “must”, “recommended”, or “advised” anywhere in the rendered content. |
| 2.5 | The QRS “presents information” instead of “providing guidance”, “recommending”, or “advising” | 🟢 | Descriptive phrasing throughout, e.g. “Each hypoxic block ends on the saturation reading, not the clock”. |
| 2.6 | The QRS never addresses “the reader” directly — it presents evidence, not guidance | 🟢 | No second-person pronouns present. |
| 2.7 | The QRS is written in plain language, avoiding unnecessary medical jargon | 🟢 | Technical terms are confined to the biomarker table and contraindication gate where they are ER-verbatim and necessary; the At-A-Glance is jargon-free. |
| 2.8 | Information is presented in a concise and very compact manner | 🟢 | Every gate, benefit, and risk entry is a bare noun phrase with no elaboration. |
| 2.9 | It DOES NOT address the reader directly | 🟢 | Confirmed by scan for second-person forms; none found. |
| 2.10 | The target audience is health- and longevity-oriented adults who are risk-aware, proactive, and actively seeking to optimize health or apply the intervention under review. | 🟢 | Content assumes willingness to undertake a supervised device-delivered course and a full baseline blood panel. |
| 2.11 | The target audience is willing to employ lifestyle and behavioral changes as well as follow protocols that may be inconvenient, costly, or require effort. | 🟢 | A 10–15 session clinic course and 12-marker monitoring panel are presented without hedging on burden. |
| 2.12 | The document is NOT written for the general population, who are unwilling to employ lifestyle and behavioral changes or follow protocols that may be inconvenient, costly, or require effort. | 🟢 | No simplification toward casual use; functional biomarker ranges rather than conventional cut-offs are given. |
| 2.13 | Framing, takeaways, and risk/benefit weighting throughout the document reflect this audience, including where an intervention’s signal for the average person differs from its signal for this audience. | 🟢 | At-A-Glance separates the durable findings from the weak ones and flags that ageing claims rest on cell and animal work. |
| 2.14 | The document’s own voice frames usage in longevity terms, not “anti-aging” (e.g., “anti-aging clinics”, “anti-aging community”, “anti-aging medicine”). Proper names that contain “anti-aging” (e.g., “American Academy of Anti-Aging Medicine”) are quoted verbatim. | 🟢 | “Longevity” in the title and header; “ageing” used descriptively; no “anti-aging” anywhere. |
| 2.15 | The document’s own voice uses formal clinical and scientific terminology, not colloquial or consumer-grade language (e.g., “oral medication” not “pill(s)”; “injection” not “shot”; “adverse event” not “bad reaction”). Direct quotes from sources are exempt. | 🟢 | “Low-density lipoprotein cholesterol”, “haematocrit”, “symptomatic” register held throughout; no consumer-grade substitutions. |
3. Template Integrity
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 3.1 | The following labels and headings on the QRS are fixed and not modified: Card and section headings: “Protocol”, “Time to effect”, “Benefits”, “Risk & Side Effects”, “Monitoring”, “Qualitative Assessment”; Gate headings: “Contraindications”, “Key Interactions”; Tier labels: “High”, “Medium”, “Low”, “Speculative”; Table column headers in Monitoring: “Marker”, “Target”, “Why” | 🟢 | All verified at QRS lines 446, 489, 531, 564, 586, 609, 637, 641–643, 824; tier labels at lines 535, 541, 547, 554, 612, 616, 622, 628. |
| 3.2 | All “…” from the [qrs_template] are present in the the QRS. | 🟢 | Diff of the extracted variable name sets shows every template variable present; the repeatable marker_#_* and qualitative_item_# spans are expanded to 12 and 6 instances respectively. |
| 3.3 | Spans that are not addressed in a checklist item are left unchanged | 🟢 | The website="evidence_review", website="audit" and website="full_review" spans, the footer disclaimer and all CSS are byte-identical to the template. |
4. Formatting
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 4.1 | When the source ER section is empty, the QRS uses the ER’s own empty-state phrasing verbatim. Typical phrasings are “None documented in human trials to date” and “Not formally studied” | N/A | No source ER section mapped by this QRS is empty. |
| 4.2 | Where the ER presents a bulleted item as “Label: content”, the QRS uses the ER’s bold label verbatim as the cell or row label. | 🟢 | “Standard session structure”, “Standard course”, “Target saturation, not fixed timing” match the ER bold labels at ER lines 390, 392, 394 verbatim. |
| 4.3 | Labels are not paraphrased, abbreviated, or invented. | 🟢 | Protocol labels are ER-verbatim; monitoring row labels match the ER Biomarker column exactly. |
| 4.4 | The QRS DOES NOT use emoji indicators (no 🟩, 🟥, 🟨, etc.). Color and emphasis are conveyed through CSS and bold labels. | 🟢 | Unicode scan returns no emoji; the ER’s “⚠️ Conflicted” markers are correctly stripped. |
| 4.5 | The QRS is designed to render on one A4 page. Any section that has more content in the ER than fits the per-section budget is condensed by the LLM, not extended onto a second page. | 🟢 | Per-section condensation is applied throughout: gate items are bare noun phrases with qualifiers reduced to symbols (e.g. “≥180/110 mmHg”, “≥15 events/hour”), benefit and risk tiers are collapsed to single semicolon-separated lines, and qualitative items are trimmed of the ER’s illustrative clauses. |
5. Metadata
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 5.1 | The metadata is placed inside a single HTML comment that is the first element after “<!doctype html>” and before any other comment, head, or body content. | 🟢 | Single comment spanning QRS lines 2–14, immediately after the doctype at line 1. |
| 5.2 | Inside that HTML comment the YAML block is delimited by a line “—” opening and a line “—” closing. Text before the opening “—” is permitted but is not parsed as YAML. | 🟢 | Opening “—” at line 3, closing “—” at line 13; the preceding title text sits on line 2. |
| 5.3 | The metadata is not visible in any rendered view of the QRS and is not surfaced by any other element on the sheet. | 🟢 | Enclosed in an HTML comment; no metadata value is repeated in the header, body or footer. |
| 5.4 | All frontmatter values are trimmed: no leading or trailing whitespace, no surrounding quotes unless the value contains a colon, bracket, or leading special character that requires YAML quoting. | 🟢 | Only duration: "00:03" is quoted, correctly so because the value contains a colon. |
| 5.5 | The filename of the source ER is stated as “er_filename: [er_filename]” | 🟢 | Line 4: er_filename: intermittent_hypoxia_hyperoxia_2026-0830-0012_Opus_ER.md. |
| 5.6 | Version of the QRS.md file used to create the document is stated as “qrs_prompt_version: [Version of QRS.md]” | 🟢 | Line 5: qrs_prompt_version: 26.7.02, matching the QRS.md version badge. |
| 5.7 | Creation date and time of the document is stated as “qrs_creation_date: [YYYY-MMDD-HHMM]” (e.g., 2026-0501-1430) | 🟢 | Line 6: qrs_creation_date: 2026-0830-0311, correct format. |
| 5.8 | The nickname of the AI used to create the document is stated as “qrs_creator_ai_nickname: [qrs_creator_ai_nickname]” | 🟢 | Line 7: qrs_creator_ai_nickname: Opus. |
| 5.9 | The nickname of the AI is just a single word model name without version, etc. (e.g., Opus, Sonnet, Grok, Gemini, ChatGPT) | 🟢 | “Opus” — single word, no version or qualifier. |
| 5.10 | The full name of the AI used to create the document is stated as “qrs_creator_ai_fullname: [qrs_creator_ai_fullname]” | 🟢 | Line 8: qrs_creator_ai_fullname: Opus 5. |
| 5.11 | The full name of the AI consists of the [qrs_creator_ai_nickname] and the model version number and no additional qualifier (e.g., Opus 4.6, Sonnet 3.2, Grok 4.5, Gemini 3.1, ChatGPT 5.4) | 🟢 | “Opus 5” — nickname plus version only. |
| 5.12 | The filename of the document is stated as “qrs_filename: [filename of this document]” | 🟢 | Line 9 matches the file’s actual name on disk. |
| 5.13 | All frontmatter values are trimmed: no leading or trailing whitespace, no surrounding quotes unless the value contains a colon, bracket, or leading special character that requires YAML quoting. | 🟢 | All nine keys carry trimmed values; quoting used only where YAML requires it. |
6. Page Title & Header
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6.1 | [page_title] is set to the [canonical_topic] of the ER frontmatter followed by “ - Quick Reference Sheet” (e.g., “Intervention - Quick Reference Sheet”). The [canonical_topic] is HTML-entity-encoded as needed (e.g., & for &) |
🟢 | Line 22: “Intermittent Hypoxia-Hyperoxia for Health & Longevity - Quick Reference Sheet”, matching ER canonical_topic with the ampersand encoded. |
| 6.2 | [header_topic] is set to the [canonical_topic] of the ER frontmatter, with HTML entities encoded as needed (e.g., & for &) |
🟢 | Line 417 carries the canonical topic with &. |
| 6.3 | [header_subline_date] is set to [qrs_creation_date reformatted as MM/DD/YYYY] | 🟢 | Line 421: “08/30/2026”, the correct reformat of 2026-0830-0311. |
| 6.4 | [header_subline_model] is set to [qrs_creator_ai_fullname] | 🟢 | Line 425: “Opus 5”, matching the frontmatter value. |
| 6.5 | No additional header content appears: no badge, version stamp, AKA / alternate names line, source-AI attribution, audit date, or QRS variant marker. | 🟢 | Header contains only the title and the template subline; the ER’s seven alternate names are not carried over. |
7. At-A-Glance Section
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 7.1 | [at_a_glance] is dense, execution-oriented summary of the ER Conclusion section |
🟢 | Compresses ER lines 523 and 527 into delivery format, the findings that hold, and the ones that do not. |
| 7.2 | [at_a_glance] is no longer than 60 words | 🟢 | 58 words. |
| 7.3 | Every fact in [at_a_glance] is supported by a distinct passage in the ER. | 🟢 | Delivery mode from ER line 37/523; the three durable findings from ER line 523; the weak-signal list and the cell/animal caveat from the same passage. |
| 7.4 | It DOES NOT use acronyms or technical classifications that require specialist knowledge, uses plain-language terms instead | 🟢 | No acronyms; “blood sugar”, “thinking”, “cell and animal work” used in place of the ER’s clinical register. |
| 7.5 | It DOES NOT cite specific trials (names, years, sample sizes, p-values) | 🟢 | No trial names, years, sample sizes or p-values. |
| 7.6 | It DOES NOT cite effect sizes, relative risks, or statistical results | 🟢 | No numeric results of any kind. |
8. Contraindications
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 8.1 | The section is derived from the ER Key Interactions & Contraindications section |
🟢 | All 15 entries trace to ER lines 339 and 355–368. |
| 8.2 | [stop_items] represent the Contraindications from the ER | 🟢 | The ER’s 14 avoidance populations plus erythropoiesis-stimulating agents, which the ER labels “Absolute contraindication” at line 339. |
| 8.3 | Individual [stop_items] are formatted as <li></li> | 🟢 | 15 <li> elements at QRS lines 567–581. |
| 8.4 | Items are as concise as possible. No trailing explanations, no elaborations, no mechanistic rationale, no attributions, no citations, no study details. No content after an em-dash, en-dash, or hyphen-dash (e.g., “— dose reduction required”, “— reduced efficacy”) — these trailing clauses are stripped. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | No trailing clauses; the only en-dash is the range inside “class III–IV”. The ER’s mechanistic rationale for the ESA contraindication (“Additive stimulation of red-cell production risks excessive haematocrit and thrombosis”) is stripped. |
| 8.5 | Parenthetical qualifiers from the ER bullet — time windows, severity classes, threshold values, clinical staging — ARE preserved as part of the item, kept as concise as possible (shortened or trimmed where needed to fit the one-page budget, but never dropped entirely). | 🟢 | “within 90 days”, “within 6 months”, “class III–IV”, “(≥180/110 mmHg)”, “any functional class”, “below 92%”, “above 52%”, “(≥15 events/hour)”, “less than 5 years” all retained in compressed form. |
| 8.6 | When the ER uses ranking notation inside parens (e.g., “>” for severity ordering) that depends on an explanatory phrase to interpret, normalize the items to a plain comma-separated list rather than carrying through the bare symbol. | N/A | The ER uses no ranking notation in its contraindication list. |
| 8.7 | The section is left empty ONLY IF the ER’s Key Interactions & Contraindications section identifies no population, condition, or scenario for which the intervention should be avoided, deferred, or used only under specialist supervision. |
🟢 | The ER names 14 avoidance populations plus an absolute drug contraindication, and the section is correspondingly populated. |
| 8.8 | If the section is left empty, an HTML comment inside the [stop_items] span records the ER basis for the absence, naming or quoting the ER text relied on. E.g. | N/A | The section is not empty. |
9. Key Interactions
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 9.1 | The section is derived from the ER Key Interactions & Contraindications section |
🟢 | All nine entries trace to ER lines 333–351. |
| 9.2 | [caution_items] represent the Key Interactions from the ER, excluding any that are already listed as Contraindications | 🟢 | Nine of the ER’s ten interaction bullets are carried; erythropoiesis-stimulating agents are correctly excluded here and placed in the stop gate. |
| 9.3 | Individual [caution_items] are formatted as <li></li> | 🟢 | Nine <li> elements at QRS lines 589–599. |
| 9.4 | Items are as concise as possible. No trailing explanations, no elaborations, no mechanistic rationale, no attributions, no citations, no study details. No content after an em-dash, en-dash, or hyphen-dash (e.g., “— dose reduction required”, “— reduced efficacy”) — these trailing clauses are stripped. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | The ER’s “Caution/Monitor” verdicts, mechanisms and mitigations are all stripped; no trailing dash clauses remain. |
| 9.5 | Parenthetical qualifiers from the ER bullet — example drug lists, time windows, severity classes, threshold values, clinical staging — ARE preserved as part of the item, kept as concise as possible (shortened or trimmed where needed to fit the one-page budget, but never dropped entirely). | 🟢 | Named examples preserved for every bullet that carries them: amlodipine/lisinopril/losartan/bisoprolol, furosemide/hydrochlorothiazide, insulin/gliclazide, diphenhydramine, beetroot nitrate/L-Citrulline/L-Arginine, magnesium/potassium/omega-3/hibiscus/garlic. |
| 9.6 | When the ER uses ranking notation inside parens (e.g., “>” for severity ordering) that depends on an explanatory phrase to interpret, normalize the items to a plain comma-separated list rather than carrying through the bare symbol. | N/A | The ER uses no ranking notation in its interaction bullets. |
| 9.7 | The section is left empty ONLY IF the ER’s Key Interactions & Contraindications section identifies no interaction, additive effect, or exposure that changes how the intervention is used. |
🟢 | The ER names ten interactions and the section is correspondingly populated. |
| 9.8 | If the section is left empty, an HTML comment inside the [caution_items] span records the ER basis for the absence, naming or quoting the ER text relied on. E.g. | N/A | The section is not empty. |
10. Protocol
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 10.1 | The section is derived from the ER Protocol section |
🟢 | All three cells derive from ER Therapeutic Protocol lines 390–394. |
| 10.2 | The three sets of [action] items cover the three most important actionable implementation aspects from the ER Protocol section |
🟢 | Session structure, course length, and the saturation-target rule are the ER’s first three bullets and the only ones that specify what is actually done; the remaining ER bullets are competing approaches and population caveats. |
| 10.3 | If less that three distinct actionable implementation aspects are mentioned in the ER the unused sets are left empty and made invisible, not filled with placeholder text or empty-state phrasing. | N/A | The ER supplies three distinct actionable aspects, so all three sets are used. |
| 10.4 | All used [action_#label], [action#value], [action#_sub] items are filled with meaningful content derived from the ER Protocol section. |
🟢 | All nine cells populated; values and subs carry the ER’s numeric parameters (3–5 cycles, 24–40 min, 10–14%, 30–40%, 10–15 sessions, 80–85% nadir). |
11. Time to Effect
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 11.1 | The three sets of [time] items cover the three most important time-to-effect aspects from the ER | 🟢 | Blood pressure/autonomic, walking capacity and cognition are the only outcomes for which the ER states a time to effect (ER line 447). |
| 11.2 | The sets are picked and ordered by the magnitude of the related benefit | 🟢 | Blood pressure and functional exercise capacity are ER High-tier benefits and occupy slots 1 and 2; cognitive screening is a Medium-tier benefit and occupies slot 3. |
| 11.3 | If less that three distinct time-to-effect aspects are mentioned in the ER the unused sets are left empty and made invisible, not filled with placeholder text or empty-state phrasing. | N/A | The ER supplies three distinct time-to-effect aspects, so all three sets are used. |
| 11.4 | All used [time_#label], [time#value], [time#_sub] items are filled with meaningful content derived from the ER. | 🟢 | All nine cells populated; “Single session”, “5–7 weeks” and the qualifier “Measured only at five to seven weeks” match ER line 447 including its “nothing shorter has demonstrated them” caveat. |
| 11.5 | If the ER does not provide any information on time to effect, the section is removed completely from the Protocol Panel |
N/A | The ER provides time-to-effect information at line 447, so the section is retained. |
12. Benefits
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 12.1 | The section is derived from the ER Expected Benefits section |
🟢 | All 13 entries map one-to-one onto the ER’s benefit headings at lines 153–237. |
| 12.2 | Key variables are [benefits_high], [benefits_medium], [benefits_low], [benefits_speculative] | 🟢 | All four spans present and populated at QRS lines 533, 539, 545, 552, matching the ER’s four tiers. |
| 12.3 | Items are as concise as possible. No explanations, no elaborations, no effect sizes, no qualifiers, no attributions, no citations, no study details, no mechanistic explanations, etc. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | Each entry is the ER heading alone; every Magnitude line, mechanism sentence and trial description is dropped. |
| 12.4 | Parenthetical content — including effect sizes, sample notes, mechanistic hints, and example studies — is stripped, NOT preserved. | 🟢 | No parentheses appear in any benefits span; the ER’s “⚠️ Conflicted” markers are also removed. |
| 12.5 | If no items of a specific sub-section (high, medium, low, speculative) are present the respective is set to “display=none”, not filled with “None documented in human trials to date” or similar empty-state phrasing. | N/A | All four ER benefit tiers contain items. |
13. Risks
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 13.1 | The section is derived from the ER Potential Risks & Side Effects section |
🟢 | All eight entries map one-to-one onto the ER’s risk headings at lines 263–311. |
| 13.2 | Key variables are [risks_high], [risks_medium], [risks_low], [risks_speculative] | 🟢 | All four spans present and populated at QRS lines 611, 614, 620, 626, matching the ER’s four tiers. |
| 13.3 | Items are as concise as possible. No explanations, no elaborations, no effect sizes, no qualifiers, no attributions, no citations, no study details, no mechanistic explanations, etc. Just the key fact. | 🟢 | Each entry is the ER heading alone; the ER’s adverse-event counts (95 events across 20 participants) and effect sizes are dropped. |
| 13.4 | Parenthetical content — including frequencies, severity grades, sample notes, mechanistic hints, and example studies — is stripped, NOT preserved. | 🟢 | No parentheses appear in any risks span; the “⚠️ Conflicted” marker on the haemoglobin/haematocrit item is removed. |
| 13.5 | If no items of a specific sub-section (high, medium, low, speculative) are present the respective is set to “display=none”, not filled with “None documented in human trials to date” or similar empty-state phrasing. | N/A | All four ER risk tiers contain items. |
14. Monitoring
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 14.1 | The section is derived from the ER Monitoring section |
🟢 | Table and cadence derive from ER Monitoring Protocol & Defining Success, lines 475–492. |
| 14.2 | All measurable/quantifiable biomarkers from the Monitoring section are listed |
🟢 | All 12 ER table rows present in ER order — SpO₂, haemoglobin, haematocrit, ferritin, hs-CRP, HbA1c, fasting glucose, LDL-C, ApoB, seated blood pressure, RMSSD, ALT — with targets and reasons carried verbatim. |
| 14.3 | [monitoring_cadence] is populated with the monitoring cadence/frequency derived from the ER Monitoring section. It is not left with placeholder text or empty. |
🟢 | QRS lines 814–818 reproduce the ER’s two-track cadence from line 477, including the complete-blood-count escalation trigger. |
15. Qualitative Assessment
| # | Description | Result | Comments |
|---|---|---|---|
| 15.1 | The section is derived from the ER Monitoring section |
🟢 | All six entries derive from the ER’s qualitative-marker list at lines 496–501. |
| 15.2 | All subjective/qualitative biomarkers from the Monitoring section are listed |
🟢 | All six ER items present: energy/fatigue, breathlessness on familiar exertion, sleep onset latency and night-waking, cognitive clarity and word-finding, post-session headache/dizziness/flushing, and exercise recovery. |
Issues 30/08/2026 03:32
Pass rate 100.00%. No issues found.
Issues 30/08/2026 03:25
- 2.15 — Colloquial “bloods” in cadence: The monitoring cadence at line 815 says “bloods at 6 weeks, 3 months”; the ER’s own voice is “Blood testing repeats at 6 weeks, then at 3 months” (ER line 477).
- 1.3 — Asthma contraindication narrowed: Contraindication line 573 reads “uncontrolled asthma” where the ER (line 361) excludes “poorly controlled asthma”, softening the gate to a narrower population.
Fixes 30/08/2026 03:25
- 2.15 — Colloquial “bloods” replaced: Monitoring cadence now reads “blood testing at 6 weeks, 3 months” instead of “bloods at 6 weeks, 3 months”, matching the ER’s formal wording.
- 1.3 — Asthma contraindication restored: Changed “uncontrolled asthma” to “poorly controlled asthma” so the gate covers the same population the ER excludes.
Issues 30/08/2026 03:17
- 4.5 — Exceeds one-page A4 budget: Content volume runs to roughly two A4 pages: a 15-item contraindication gate with eight two-line wraps, a 12-row monitoring table, and long
action_#_sub/time_#_sub/qualitative_item_#strings that each wrap to two or three lines. - 2.8 — Elaboration instead of key fact:
time_2_subandtime_3_sub(lines 514–531) repeat the same 14-word sentence with one noun changed, and five of sixqualitative_item_*spans (lines 839–872) append rationale clauses rather than naming the marker.
Fixes 30/08/2026 03:17
- 4.5 / 2.8 — Duplicated time-to-effect subs: Replaced the two near-identical 14-word
time_2_subandtime_3_subsentences with “Measured only at five to seven weeks”, and trimmedtime_1_subfrom “Appear after one session and consolidate over three weeks” to “Consolidate over three weeks” since the value cell already states “Single session”. - 4.5 / 2.8 — Qualitative items carried rationale: Stripped the trailing explanatory clauses from all six
qualitative_item_*spans, leaving the marker itself (e.g. “Sleep onset latency and night-waking frequency”, “Cognitive clarity and word-finding”). - 4.5 — Protocol sub cells condensed: Shortened
action_1_subto “5 min at 10–14% inspired oxygen alternating with 3 min at 30–40%”,action_2_subto “On weekdays, or 3 weekly over 6 weeks in geriatric trials”, andaction_3_subto “Each hypoxic block ends on the saturation reading, not the clock”, each now fitting a single line. - 4.5 / 8.4 — Contraindication gate wrapping: Condensed eight two-line stop items to one line each while preserving every threshold and time window — e.g. “Uncontrolled hypertension (≥180/110 mmHg)”, “Untreated moderate-to-severe sleep apnoea (≥15 events/hour)”, “Unstable angina, or class III–IV stable angina”. All 15 items are retained.
- 4.5 / 9.4 — Key Interactions gate wrapping: Reduced “Supplements with additive blood-pressure lowering (magnesium, potassium, omega-3 fatty acids, hibiscus, garlic extract)” to “Blood-pressure-lowering supplements (magnesium, potassium, omega-3, hibiscus, garlic)” and dropped the redundant “Over-the-counter” prefix from the sedating-antihistamine item.
- 4.5 — Monitoring cadence condensed: Tightened
monitoring_cadencefrom “blood testing repeats at 6 weeks, then at 3 months, then every 6 to 12 months if courses are repeated” to “bloods at 6 weeks, 3 months, then every 6–12 months if courses repeat”, keeping the complete-blood-count escalation trigger.